Reviews for Inverted
Sekhmet Johnson chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Yes, it is.

'tis I! The eternal mash! Once again stamping upon the sober air of this poem, the other reviews, and indeed your very account by simply being here!

Hold the applause, please.

Right. I very much like this.I reckon I'm the only one who's actually said that in so many words, here.

And crap, you were what, eleven? ELEVEN, gil?

This goes on my favourites list, because no matter how old you were when you wrote all this, I adore it, and also I enjoy embarassing you 3
Monogamy Bogonansi chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
hahaha! Bob has found you! Fear Bob!but seriously, dearest Polygamy, this is good, I don't care what you say, this good...and you were what, eleven. Diction's a bit shaky in some blurry areas. Pubescent earnesty obvious in every line, but I believe there is a certain elusive quality about the art of youth. There is power in the clumsy eager truthfulness of children, simply because, as I've said before [if you'll allow me onto my soapbox for a moment] Art Is About Revealing The Truth, you've caught that perfectly here, applying some well-intentioned adult restraint. But you have done it tons better than most published adult sci-fi writers. The first few paragraphs are exquisite, spare, precise. After that, it retains its ethereal beauty, but begins off-tracking. a little self-indulgent. overall, job well done. Cheers, and happy Easter.

Long live the Bob Empire!
Raven Silvers chapter 1 . 12/31/2003
Disturbing. And that is an understatement. Apt title is what I can say. And the aforementioned disturbing.
Freaky, G, freaky. This is plain and down-right scary. Although, I have to say, you used the inverted part well.
Brilliant, as usual. Likely tonight I won't be able to sleep.
- V.
Aria yes THAT Aria chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
*squeak*

Wow. Like... wow. *slowly pushes jaw back into original position* Terrific job, G. Very dark and angsty and frightening and twisted and perverse and... dammit, this piece freaked me out. Your most powerful work yet. Write more like this, G, and I will start permanently having nightmares. You've painted a gory picture... just... wow. O.O
Marionette chapter 1 . 3/20/2003
Creepy and well...brilliant. o.O;; I can't explain it, but that was really spectacular. Good job, G.
yola chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
You're a great writer. Love your humor.

Wish I could write like this...

Powerfull, honest, blunt, scary..well, you'll get the picture, write on!
Troubled Mind chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
wow, very very powerful stuff there... i was at awe...