Reviews for Unwanted
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Couldn't have written a better poem to describe exactly how I feel right now. parents suck.
javascript chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
Nice, very nicely done. 'Last night I died' was a very good line...if this were about me, I'd probably say 'Last year I died'...
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
I feel like that sometimes by almost all of my family.
babygurl2 chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
Hey, I'm really sorry about, w/e it is that's going on. I hope things start to look up for you. I really liked you're poem. Cutting Edge is really good to!
Syal chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
Succintly put. I've felt like this more than once, but i guess some parents just don't get it.
noangel chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
i really like it! it describes exactly how i my father i felt yesterday,after another argument with my father...

youre really good!
lighted eagle chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
you'll never be unwanted as far as i'm concerned...coz i'll always want you in a completely non-sexual intrest poem, i like the use of repition...umm...oh yeh, have a good christmas!