Reviews for Monsters
trouble-makerz-4ever chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
woh! that was totally awesome! i love it!
Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
i have that feeling alot.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
that was a good poem. it was a good story [/tale/whatever] but didn't use imagery as much and seemed more rhyme based: the rhymes depicting how the poem went. It does seem [as someone said] like a poem you might work on in school from a book although I wouldn't say for a higher year [/grade] because the insight and background's not there. It would be simple to analyse as there aren't lots of hidden meanings.

"I vicariously went to his planet, so it seems."

This line seems to be an odd-one-out as it didn't fit the line before and after it; the rhythmn suddenly went. Although there are minor faults, the poem was good.

Cali.

could you plz r&r my fic if you have time?

thanks!
Ryoko-onee chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
That was excellent. I would like to think this is a poem I'd see in my literture book that we'd have to examine and do assignments on. It was that good.
Kyle Gon Jinn chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
Wow, this is great!