Reviews for Not Enough
Embyr Black chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
very touching i hope things can work out between her and her father. i know what she is going through. i was never sure if i wanted to ever see mine and now we talk all the time granted it stil hurts he wasnt there but he is now and i need to shut up. great poem
Zainab chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
Depressing, but good. I'm sure other people are able to relate to this.
kaika switched chapter 1 . 12/26/2002
Great poem. I don't really have anything to say being that I don't know the writer, or her(his?) father, but it was emotional. Nice work.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 12/22/2002
I hate fathers. Hate hate hate hate hate hate...

No one sees poems about people writing nasty things about their mothers. It is always the father.

::hisses:: They are Satan, in my eyes. At least mine is, and this guy...and about 20849846650 other fathers in the world. -_-

But...rant aside! This was a good poem. Very concise and constructed.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
Joflower chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
does your friend expect too much from her father? i'm sure he's not that bad...

tis written very well, very deep.
BlueMoonDuchess chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
WOW! That was fantastically brilliant! Short and simple, gets to the point yet it has an awesome creative direction. Great job!