Reviews for Challenge Year 2023
TheDarknessofInsanity chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I really like this story! Write and post MOOOOOOORE!
Nairesda chapter 1 . 12/20/2002
Suggestions: Don't describe the other six shifters in so much detail. If they aren't important to the story, leave them as shifters. Don't even give them a name, to many names are hard to remember. Also, I think you move to quickly, without giving enough background information. At the beginning, I was under the impression that Katherine was an officer, not a 'trainee'. I think you should make that a little clearer. Also, one last thing, press the enter key whenever the speaker changes. It will keep the dialogue easier to read.

Great ideas though!

-Nairesda