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![]() ![]() ![]() plz plz plz plz keep goin u just left me hanging there plz plz plz plz dont stop |
![]() ![]() I've been a long-time fan of this story, even when it was deleted from and you had relocated it to your site. I hadn't checked it recently and this update just made me smile. I worried that you had possibly abandoned this excellent work, but I'm very glad to see that I was wrong. I have to admit, I greatly enjoy the unique perspectives of your characters and how they develop and grow. Their responses and emotions feel both real and understandable. (Such as Carrie's hatred, and Kevin's slow, but sure change of heart.) April's trials and her being ostracized are feelings that many can relate to, and they make her and excellent protagonist. I think your characters are very memorable and that you do a fantastic job in writing them. Thank you for creating such entertaining and lifelike characters. The one thing I'd personally like to see is an Interlude from Jamal's perspective. It has to be difficult being the best friend who gets told everything, and that'd be interesting to see. Whether that happens or not is up to you, but I'd like to thank you again for the update to this spectacular piece of literature. (If I were to nitpick a bit, I'd say that the most recent chapter feels somewhat incomplete in the middle portions, but I'm not complaining. The very proof that this story is still alive and kicking is all I need to keep checking it periodically.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story. The plot and everything and the fact that you used so many different point of views. I read in one sitting. What is it rated M for? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit, it's about time! Don't worry about the length of time it took to update, as I say, "You can't rush quality" and this was another great chapter. Seriously, you have no idea how excited I got when I noticed this was updated. All I can say is I hope you update again soon, because this is truly an awesome story. (Which is rare for me to say since I am a really picky reader). Thank you for finally updating. Respectfully, Carie Valentine aka random person 007 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress. You're a really good writer. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm..ok this is a good story. is there more to come or have you stopped here? ahh well, cya later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I was going through my favorite story list and was reading through them and so on. Anyway, I really like this story. I remember when you first put it out and it was under the old rating system but I never reviewed. Then when they changed the ratings and so on your story got deleted I like checked your web site religiously for updates. I was and still am addicted to your story, I still check religiously for updates. Just decided to write this in hopes of some, I dunno, spark, I guess. I guess this is my way of motivating you in a speedy update and to let you know after all these years... I'm still waiting. |
![]() ![]() what happened to you? you haven touched this in more than a year... you die? or did the idea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story... you havent updated in almost a year. I was just wondering if this story was done. Cause it would be awesome if it still had more to it. Just wanted to tell you great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you haven't updated in a long time and the story is really good. hopefully I'll be readi9ng some new chapters soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! evil abusive father is gone. i hope that the rest of the family likes april. i hope she starts to teach jayme too. do we ever find out who justin's father is? luv hannah banana |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank god he's gone! how can there be cruel bastards like that man in the world? how can they enjoy beating someone up and think it "fun"? it's so freaking confusing. i hate it. yay for kevin! he stood up to that bastard. ho kevin! haa..hitting on a baby...fat bastard. please update sooN! |
![]() ![]() This is the first time that I've sat down and read the whole thing from start to finish (I have, of course, been reading it avidly since you started posting *grin*) and I have to say, this is comfortably the most powerful piece of writing I've ever read (published or unpublished). I very, very much hope you'll be able to add some more to an already excellent story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jolly good story. and no i'm not a british persona. i just like using some words. i really like it. write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really great. i really hope you update this story son! |