loved it!

"Good to here it." He started forward again, picking up the pace so he could be rid of her sooner.-hear not here.

Omg that was so cute! :D at the end I mean :P this is a great story I absolutely love it! :D

I haven't had a chance to read the new chapter (in face I think I might read the whole thing again before I read the new chapter) but I am so happy you updated! It was awesome to see that in my inbox!

I'm guessing the epilogue's next? Yay! And will there be a sequel or does the mere, pathetic existence of Zack end next chapter? What an ass.

This is really sweet, but very late too! How long did I wait for this chapter? Too long, that's all I know!

I just hope that the rest will come soon!

But great chapter! I love it! (of course, since they both live!) So keep it up!

;)

You have come back! Hoorah! Well done. well, done.

Yay! They're okay...Good job~

I don't think that I saw any mistakes, really. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm glad that Zack got injured...Well, I can't say glad because, in a way, it's mean...

~Miyako

You're back! Awesome! :D You definitely didn't disappoint with this chapter. I had no clue what was going to happen but you made one hell of a ride out of it!

Cheers

~~sharky

omgg u updated yay! :) ive been waiting forever for this chapter to come out! i lovee this story soo much, please update soon!

wow u really can't leave it like that! ah i need to know what happened! well i think the story has gone great despite ur taking breaks though i have just read it and didn't have to deal with waiting for the updates.

It is 350am right now. I have been reading this story non-stop since 8pm... technically of yesterday.

I am addicted.

I literally can't fall asleep because of this crazy cliffhanger you've left us with.

I really, really, REALLY hope you finish this, because it's actually freaking tearing me apart not knowing what happened...(James should definitely live, btw [; hehe)

Okay enough of my crazy fangirlishness.

If there is one thing I could commend you for-and it's one of SEVERAL-it'd definitely be your character development. All the characters are so... this is a lame word, but consistent. Even with Zack, his inconsistency is consistent. That's something soo many writers on this website forget; it's refreshing to read someone who remembers that(: I also really just have to mention-you write really amazing action scenes. Some of the best I've ever read, including those in published books. They're all very vivid, I love that!

Okay, so in a nutshell you're awesome.

... (:

James died?

Gosh, I almost cried! Wow... is really doing a number on me!

XOXO

That isn't the end is it? Because if you think it is you have to be wrong. I mean, even if you're cruel enough to kill James, it's still not enough. I seriously hope you haven't killed him though, he's to god damn lucky for it to all end now! And it wouldn't fit the story, there HAS to be a happy ending. Cliche or not, you can't let it become a tragedy and you can't leave us hanging either! You must update! Please? I really, really like this story and you can't be far from finishing it, right? Just one more boust of inspiration! I'm sure if it were you, and you were reading a really great story which just left you hanging, you'd want to be able to see the end result. Am I correct? (As you mentioned it, I had to give the whole guilt tripping thing at least a try :D)

Take care and please carry on, it would be a shame not to rap things up, especially as you've come this far.

~Lara~

omg please update! Dyng from suspense!