i am confused. so was this all a dream or is this just a "filler" ?

What the shiznit... Really? And all the typos too? What :(

this story was AMAMZING! and i really hope u post the real last chapter soon

I loved Zack even though he was a bad-guy(: You have a wonderful story on your hands. Was that really the last chapter or your April Fools chapter because in all honesty, if that's your real chapter it's shit. (Yeah, I didn't understand the April Fools thing) I don't mean to offend because you're a brilliant writer! The plot was somewhat original for Cliche and your characters REAL but I do really hope that that wasn't your last chapter :/

You REALLY do have a wonderful story on your hands;

Well done.

holy cr*p.

the ending just had me pulling out my hair.

you spent so much time building the characters and the plot! and it ends up to be a dream. All I really wanna do right now is scream actually. i actually really loved your story. and i still do. the twist in the ending made me want to read it and re-analyze everything to see if there were any hints at all that it was actually a dream. i hope you write an alternate ending. perhaps for the readers who want to see a full conclusion, like me.

So, uh... what? Was that really the final chapter? Or does it still need to be written?

Hahhahaha ahahaha ahahaha ahahaha ahaha aha aha ahH ha haahH HHAHA A AHAA A AHA AHA AHAHA HAHA HAHA HAAH AH AAH AHAHAH AAH AAH AHAHAHAA! that was just the BEST! You should totally publish this book! I know i would buy it!...is it completly complete? cause you haven't labeled it complete at the top...i'll alert it just in case...love your story btw_

Well, it seems that you never uploaded the 'real' chapter. You really have a great story here (and obviously your reviewers think so as well- 30 reviews is very impressive.)

We've gotta be getting close to the end. I hope that you will heed your many reviewers and upload the actual chapter. This story is so well-written, even in the early chapters.

Please update!

OH MY GOD , OH MY GOD , OH MY GOD, dude u totally killed the ending lol...i can't believe this. u had such amazing ideas , such an amazing plots wid awesome characters and in the end what did u do , u just killed it. OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE U. in the end u should have made everytihng ok and settle everytihng. i can't, i seriously can't believe u r ending. u just ruine millon worthy story , with such a lame and stupid ending. i'm so surprised and dunbstruked that i can't even think straigh at u r stupidity. seriously since yesterday i have done nothin but read u r story patiently 4 hours and hours and after all that. in the end u totally killed the story , ...sheesh...i' M NEVER READING YOUR STORIES AGAIN. 4 GOD'S SAKE CHANGE THE ENDING. IF U HAVE EVEN AN OUNCE OF COMMON SENSE U WILL CHANGE THE ENDING.

ffs! update already, freak!

i absolutely LOVE this story! its ah-mazing!

please, could you recommend me any more kindnapped stories like this? i love this genre, but cant seem to find many. thankss, please UPDATE!

-ilovepunks. xx

That was the stupidest ending I have ever read... and that's including Twilight! Your story was really good until I read that ending!

Now that I read back I see that you said you were going to change it. Then I looked at the date last updated and it's been FOUR months! When are you going to change it? You could always still keep the dream thing but make it way better, or how I would end it she runs back to find chaos, thinks James is dead, then finds him at the car all battered to hell... then if you really want to get sappy, Brian could be there to... Also a final showdown between James and Zach would be cool.

hey... where did the real last chapter go?

I have had this story bookmarked for EVER . . . I periodically check back for updates, even though I had all but given up hope, and was AMAZED and THRILLED to see there was new stuff to read! Please, please, please update again soon!

You have got to be kidding me. That just can't be the last chapter (April Fool's Day joke?). Anyway, PLEASE CONTINUE!