what! why? you suck banana balls! i honest to god want to kill you! this is one of the best stories i have read in a while! i was all prepared to comment on how awesome you are, blah blah blah, put the story on my favourites...but you havent updated in months!

COME ON! IT IS SO CLOSE! IF YOU FINISH IT I WILL EVEN NOMINATE YOU FOR SKOW!

dont let the team down.

This story is so addictive! I keep seeing it playing out like a movie and the chapters are a really nice length :)

Forever and Always,

DolphinWriter88

This story is really good. Please update soon.

WAH I NEVER SWORE SO MUCH IN MY LIFE! this isnt fair *Crosses arms*

Omg! That was horribly cruel! I nearly banged my head against the wall! Please update soon! the story is awesome! and funny. :) update soon!

What a cruel joke...I love this story, please update soon

Hey! I love your story! And though i know that's not enough to get you to update...I really hope you do! :) The curiosity is killing me! You have no idea how much I really want to finish this story. :) It's really great and I bet I'm not the only one saying that. :))

Please update soon. I thought this was already complete when I started reading it, and didn't realize it wasn't until chapter 32.

I'd love to know how this all wraps up :).

Alright, so I love this story. I was disappointed with the last chapter though. I felt like I read all this for nothing; but I'll get over it. Great work with the plot, characters, storyline.

okay so... I skipped the Author's note and read the "chapter"... I was pissed and then I read the A/N... You are too funny. haha! I was like what the crap! haha you really had me going there for a sec. Please update with the actual chapter! I'm actually going to start rereading this again. It's been i don't know 2 years since I've read this, but it was definitely one of my faves! :)

so please put up the real chapters haha! :)

you're right, the homophones are frustrating. although oddly appropriate considering I have a test about them on wed for my linguistics class... hmm. Well the past couple chapters have been wonderful! I'm glad you've decided to complete this story. I can't wait to read more (hopefully soon).

~Mel

OKAY COME ON? REALLY NOW. I SPEND ALL NIGHT READING, AND GET THIS? WITH NO REAL CHAPTER? COME ON!

...jerk.

James better live. Zach is my favorite. Um. Brian's death? Appropriate.

So now hurry up and update ASAP with the final chapter. Or next to last chapter. COME ON.

The more I think about this and the more I read your story, I kinda see what the hell was wrong with me copying your story since its a bummer. I mean, yeah yeah, its a good story..blah..blah..blah but really its NOT all that. I seriously feel stupid for copying your story and especially since it wasn't a good one by the way. It kinda stinks to me but whatever. Later and please don't make such a big deal out of it. Stop crying and just move on.

So, far the story is quiet interesting but I found one mistake when James said "Good to here it" instead of here it should be hear.

I hope the story will only become better :)

I can't believe how many people fell for your joke! It really was funny. Update soon :)

J