What can I say? Even with your absence from FP, you definitely haven't lost your touch with the story. It reads like you've never left! (Hope that makes sense).

Found it incredibly sweet on two accounts: first, the kiss James gave to Sam, and secondly, how she stunned him by pulling off that gymnastics stunt. So cute :)

And I still will pretend to hate leaving the readers in suspense :P

I had almost forgot about fictionpress too, and the stories I've also left half finished (but none quite as captivating as yours!)

hope you get this review alert! And I would have started stating about how much I hate you leaving this reader in suspense like this, but I also got an alert you have a couple more chapters uploaded. So I will wait until I finish reading those chapters before I complain about the story leaving me in suspense :P

No way!

Ugh! Some people are so pathetic!

They don't have talent so they have

to steal someone else's.

Thanks for still finishing it tho.

THANK YOU

You're a great author : ).

WickedLovelyRose is a freak!

Hi. I recently read the plagiarized version of this story on and I was impressed with it. Then some of your fans got in touch with me and told me it is actually your story. From what I have read so far I think it is very good. Nice job! and I'm sorry about the mess with this person on ; hope she stops.

Kopy Kat

I feel your pain! Not because I've been plagarised myself but because all these great stories that i've read online have been plagarised, causing them to be taken down.

I'm one of those people who love to read stories over and over again, especially since they are fantastic. But because of these horrible people, I am not able to do so and instead, these wonderful stories are taken down and I am never able to read them again :(

Gosh, it's so kind of all of these writers on fictionpress to actually write stories and share them with the people but some people just abuse such privileges and it's just such a shame.

I'm glad that you have the courage to finish this story despite that though. I thank you so much for it and I wish you all the best!

Good luck!

D:

I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! RAWR

I love it. It made me laugh so much. xD

You may be in a life-threatening situation, but you can still laugh about it, hehe... AWESOME UPDATE. MOAR SOON PLZ! :)

Love the cliffhangers you so often provide. And i love the subtle hints of how the other one is feeling that then get confirmed. That came out confusing but I mean how when they were running, James was fidgeting with his vest and then when it switched to his point of view he admitted wanting to give it to her earlier, showing his indecision. I love this story and am so glad you've returned! Can't wait for more!

I'm so sorry! :( I really hope that you will finish soon because this is one of my favorite stories! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness!

-Bubbly Girl

Ah my hell. Well this just sucks. I was actually going to comment on this story tomorrow (technically later today, now) and tell you how awesome it is that you've resumed updating on this and now wham. This terrible news happens. I'm freaking mad as hell and it didn't even happen to me! I mean this is a really good story and it completely blows that it's been stolen. I went over to the person's account and saw the story and was just absolutely disgusted. Gr. I don't blame you for wanting it taken down. In fact, I want to say thank you for deciding to finish it, then remove it. That's extremely generous, so thanks for still marching on with it.

I will go back and comment later. I actually want to re-read because I've forgotten some things that have happened. I remember Peter and Sophie, I remember that James left her, but I forget the circumstances behind it. I just need a refresher, then I'll leave a proper comment.

Just gah! I'm absolutely fuming right now and I'm so sorry this happened to you. People suck. Well, the plagiarizing kind, anyway. Bloody thieves.

You are a trooper, Mystified. Thank you for all your hard work.

Mhmm, it's kind of terrible that people can't even post their stories anymore without idiots like that stealing them (and the worst part is that people like her don't even see what they're doing as wrong).

A lot of authors from here have took their stories down but moved over to livejournal instead (posting in LJ communities or personal journals), that way they can control who gets to read it. You should try that. :)

One of the communities is called Plagiarism Haven and there's a handful of posting authors (like Samantha Nicole, simeonexsays, emwolf, myrika, angels & effects etc., from here) and hundreds of members (& there is a comment/review requirement so there's not really any silent readers).

And there's a sister community, The Write Away, that's made up mostly of the Plagiarism Haven readers where the readers can post their stories too (and with both of the communities people need to apply before being added and their reviewing history and all that stuff is checked up on so it's easier to trust the members).

So yeah, you should try doing that and join the LJ communities. :]

-Lanna

I like this story so very much and do not want it taken down! I will find this WickedLovelyRose and demand that he/she stop his/her foul behavior at once! The injustice of it all!

You have special talent as an author. You have correct grammar, capitalization, spelling, punctuation, etc., ect., and that is hard to come by. We should start a petition thingy here so you're stories stay up. I'd be the first to sign!

To my favorite lists you go!

gosh, after so long, i'll have to go back to re-read the whole thing. this story's been on my alert list since forever and i had almost forgot about it. but i'm glad you decided to update again. :)

Please tell me that what I think just happened was wrong. Update soon? Also, welcome back from no man's land. I had some strange urge to read this story a couple of days ago, and then you updated! Very exciting :) xoxo

nice chap! but u havent uploaded in soo long!

If James dies, I'll send all my lonely plot bunnies to swarm you until you rewrite, got it?

Other than that, wonderful chapter, very coherent and logical, with good writing. Not too rusty at all. :)