Go James, go! Save her. That evil sonofaburger Max...

...OH DEAR GOODNESS, that's bad.

I didn't see that one. Maybe that's the reason why it's the thirteenth chapter. This is so good, but so bad!

Ooh...Hey, guess what? *whispers* Samantha hates heels! I love that James doesn't like her with all the makeup, and that even though Samantha's going for a different look, she's still the klutz we all know her to be. In other words: this is fantabulous!

Aww, James is so awkward when not fatally maiming/being sarcastic to people. Hehehe, it's nice of him to comfort Samantha though. I love this story so much!

James, James, James. You manipulative liar. Oh well, it does seem that you're warming up to Samantha, so I guess it's okay. Freaking fantastic!

James to the rescue! Yes! So glad!

Oh no...Samantha, James, you're both prideful idiots.

A replacement goldfish...to travel around the country in? Oh dear, Samantha...Again, marvelous!

Oh no! I knew it. Poor Samantha!

Fantastic! So nice to see a heroine that DOESN'T immediately roll over and give up...

I like Brian, even though he tricked Samantha. But he seems nice enough. And James? Kinda pissy, haha.

Hehehe. Brian is right; James is one pissy man. Excellent story!

Poor girl...This is really good!

Zack makes me smile :)