im glad their moving on lol.

really interesting so far.

wow. just... wow. i just spent hours reading this whole thing all at once. and just... wow. it played out like a movie in my head... i really hope that your interest in this thing you've created is rekindled someday, and that you edit it and republish it. even if not, it was still immensely enjoyable, and thank you for it. :]

Hello. This story was, to put it simply, fantastic.
I'm really into those old action films so this was really enjoyable to read. Right now I'm kicking myself for not reading this sooner, when I'd seen it all over fp. Sad to hear you're done with writing, though, you seem really talented.

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Very nice story. Quite cute. From the moment Sam's apartment was blown to bits and James have a hell of a time capturing her, I knew this story would be a keeper. I noticed a slight change in your writing from the start to the end, but it was minor. Yet, by the end, it shows you have developed a great deal. A bit disappointed that there was no epilogue, but I'll live.

dang it. no epilogue? haha oh well(: good story anyways(: i love it(: i hope you keep writing, you're really talented(:

Aw i loved this storryyy so much. you should make like an epilogue or sequel or something :(

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! Keeping in mind the period of time it took to complete this story, I really didn't notice any inconsistencies at all. The action and scene detail kept my attention and pushed me to continue reading. The plot and characters were all nicely developed. I could feel the relationship between James and Sam slowly building and really appreciated that it wasn't pushed into anything quick and unbelievable. Great work!

so even though you said you started this story in middle school your writing style was still amazing...you didn't ever change it! i wish there was a sort of epilogue at the end...is james still in IDK...whats Sam's future since she had no family...what happened to both IDK and the langhston group...is zach dead?

Ahahaha i did not expect that! ))))))) i love your story! :D

This Is A Great Story (: Defaintly One Of My Favoriyes Noww 3 Thaank Youu Soo Muchh For Writingv It . Gave Me Something Good To Read When I Couldnt Sleep Lastnight Lol

what happend to lansigton than and zack and the rest what i'm so confused

omg omg omg omgog really they were about to get it on but then interruptions gosh i'm angruy

haahahh how adorable i love uour story so much

omg i love your story omg i love it so much.