loved the story! an epilogue would have been amazing but even without it this story is definitely one of the best on fp :)

Wow, I absolutely love this fiction ! I read it all today, I just couldn't stop !

Keep writing, you're really good at it ;)

All the best

WingedHourglass

Awww I loved the ending hehe :) this story kept me up till 1:40 am and I must say that it was so worth it :))

I really, really hate reviewing from my phone but for you I'll make an exception, because I absolutely LOVED this story!

I was hooked from the first chapter, really. A handsome kidnapper? Stockholm Syndrome, anyone? His irritation with her was pretty hilarious.

Loved how the climax was drawn-out perfectly! I've read a lot of stories where the climax is like 500 words long...which makes me go, "WHY?" Your torture scenes were good without being gross and despite the lack of a detailed sex scene (which frankly I wasn't interested in anyway) there was a lot of sizzle to Samantha and James' relationship.

I think you probably could have given it a better title though! But then again, the story WAS about her so I suppose it suits. And I also admire how you wrote this over 9 years despite losing your passion for it. Not many writers can do that!

Love the story, Wish you would add an epilogue or something to the end to take care of the hanging ending, though.

JK West

Hi :) I just want to tell you that this was a very good story and I loved how it was filled with surprises after surprises. I mean, no dull moments at all and the stuff which kept happening was unexpected so it kept me on my toes lol.

I love Zack. He's my favourite character. No offense, but James seemed a bit boring after I read about Zack :P Hehe.

But great job, and good luck with university or whatever.

This was a great read! The ending was rather abrupt though, you could've done well to tie everything up, I'm still left with a helluva lot of questions. What becomes of Zack? Where do James and Sam go from there? Does he continue with the IDK? Yadda, yadda. Anyways, good job, and good for you for completing it!

I didn't think this was dragging by at all, especially compared to other Fictionpress stories. It's extremely well written and though a bit repetitive I don't think it was dragged out at all.

I just spent the last two hours or so reading this from start to finish, and I cant say that Im disappointed at all.

Even from the beginning I could tell that this was going to be interesting, and though your writing wasnt as well developed as in the chapters further along the years, it was captivating and intriguing to say the least.

You're a really talented writer and I hope that becoming bored with this story didnt discourage you from continuing to create fantastic pieces like this, because that would simply be a shame :)

Overall, I really admire the way you created such a well thought out plot and believable characters and scenarios, but the one thing I can even think to complain about is the ending. I actually think it was pretty good with all the issues resolved, but maybe if you ever get some free time you could do an epilogue to tell us what happens with James & Sam's futures?

Anyway, sorry for the long review, but I just want to finish by saying that all those people who bothered to write that the story was dragging too long or going to fast dont really know how a story should go, and that the large number of reviews you've acquired over the years just says it all- you did a pretty good job!

xoxo, Suze :D

Amazing story, though I wanted the whole cliché brothers unite!

Oh lord, I love her already...thinking of a goldfish at a time like this. XD Waah James is so cold though...when was the last time he was with a girl? -_- obviously things are not well with Samantha and his attitude makes it even worse.

Is that the end? It sure seemed like it. it was beautifully written :)

that story. was perfect. a million brownie points to you for writing that brilliant story. it was SO well thought out. i don't care if you went on hiatus in the middle, what matters is that you completed it. and for that, I LOVE YOU!

ah you totally made my day

aawww that was awesome! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...finish this!

Ok I only rememberd to review this fic NOW!lol I'm sooo in love with this! I do know that it's not quite finished but I just got hoocked! That's how good of a writer you are! Congrats!