|Reviews for Eternal|
| Panthera ursus chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
a powerful but simple concept, continuity. i think you explored it well.
| Lindsay Beth chapter 1 . 1/11/2001
That was beautiful. The similies... The whole tone of the peice...Dude, why is it that when people say "I can't write" they always can? I really liked this, and I'm off to read more stuff. Also, thanks for reviewing that one fic of mine,and telling me I stole ur talent. It cheered my whole day up, mostly since I can see u have a lot of talent, so I don't know *what* I stole. This poem was really good!
| Minuet chapter 1 . 12/23/2000
dude..o.o;; - beleives in a goddess :D :D! -
| Shine chapter 1 . 11/16/2000
that was cool! i liked it.
| Caitlin chapter 1 . 11/16/2000
That was so evocative and mournful had to read it twice just to make sure I got the right reaction, but I guess with poetry there is no "right reaction". Although it was simple it was very emotional that was the best most sincere bit of poetry I have read in a very long time. The repeating served to create the sorrowful yet at the same time accepting tone at least that was my interpretation and it was kind of like you ripped the words out of my head. Damn, I wish I had written that.