Reviews for Empire of Immortals: Story of Alvis
Jezabel chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
Why the hell does every Vampire story rip off Anne rice ..please for the love of all thats vampiric STOP! PLEASE! although IT IS good its all too familar to anne rice...and lord byrons stories...try something different.. you'll see what i mean if you read tom hollands the vampire...because your story is the mirror image of it alothough its probably not intentional!
cendres chapter 3 . 1/10/2003
Great story...so far so good, you've got a lot of detail and information. I ask of you one thing...more killing. As a fan of vampires and writing vampire novels myself, I cannot get enough of killing people...helpless people.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/10/2003
Pretty good, write more.