Reviews for Seneca
spazticpoetgrl chapter 13 . 8/14/2003
hehe, title reminds me of that verse in the bible..good job. short bu sweet (like love, lol) spiffy. keep writin -Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 12 . 8/14/2003
kewl. i really like the last part about memories and dust. cause i mean we all keep pieces of out childhood and they sit up in the attic collecting dust, which has nothing to do with ur poem, but im weird. spiffy poem. keep writin -Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 8 . 8/14/2003
i read the others one before this, but i felt like reviewin this one, lol cause im cheap. i really like the 2nd little fragment, the 1st one is awesome two, but the 2nd just kinda stuck. good job. ps i like the butterfly one. le papillion! keep writin-Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 4 . 8/14/2003
kewl, for some reason i felt like reading this as "Ashes, ashes, we all fall down /But get back up and keep going" down...like my mind added a down. weird. good job, i like this, its realistic. keep writin -Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 3 . 8/14/2003
i like dreams. theyre mysteriuos and can help you figue things out. theres this quote that kinda goes with ur poem

""I have had dreams and I have had nightmares, but I have conquered my nightmares because of my dreams." darn that took forever to find. good job keep writin -Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 2 . 8/14/2003
o, i like that, "Only a storm could

Make silence stop" thats my favourite part. its so kewl. i love the rhyme scheme u used. keep writin -Spaz
spazticpoetgrl chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
kewl, its so detailed that you just have to admire it. i love it, i could almost see it coming alive in front of my eyes, arg cant type. keep writin -Spaz
SweetGrape chapter 12 . 7/22/2003
Old, but good metaphor. Clear, thoughtful messages with a sad idea for the ending- that other people will be walking over what are memories were.
Matthew chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
Good evening! Despite my general disinterest in poetry, I guess reading all 10 entries says something about your writing. I'm suprised you didn't force me to read it closer to when you wrote it ) Nice mix of hope and despair, rounds out the whole "collection" quite nicely. Bye for now!
Gwen Rhiannon chapter 10 . 2/2/2003
You use some really great imagery in your poetry. I also noticed you liek to use metaphors, especially those dealing with naturistic themes. I think these really can strenthen your poetry. I think the one line that stands out most was the "ashes to ashes" line just because it was so well placed and so powerful. i can tell you've been through some hard times, all i can say is keep going and keep writing. Best of Luck.
nice14u chapter 6 . 1/19/2003
This poem 'Stars' is exelent. The posiblity that they were placed with care / designed by God gives me some comfort. The way microwave radiation is about the same in all directions . ( remanents of the big bang ) The fact that stars burn out /die ... and are also reborn ..no wonder people pay good money to have a star named after them. lol ... love this one Belle! :)