Reviews for The demon of within
Mia chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
'This suicidal, masochistic sacrifice.' *wince*...masochism...beurk! lol. the word 'demon' attracted me, lol. This is long...but my poems are...woo... lol. It's different from what you usually write but really portrays an inside fight well :D. You have such a better vocabulary than me! OK...i just checked,...this is my third review for this poem...*sigh*...oh well...fanatics.. And like I said before..this poem is very...'you' lol, had I read it somewhere else...had it been written by someone else, it would've reminded me of you somehow :D. Marvellous! Cheers, lol. Mia
PS: okies..i'll stop reviewing twice...only if you write more :D mwahahahaha! Making threats now, thats not a threat...whatever.
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
I really liked this. Definitely different from everything I've read recently and, although a bit dark, it had a seductive harmony.
Good work.
Sweet Anti-Christ chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Hey! It's me...Mia..who else! apologising for the silly name again. I've already reviewed this but i wasnt sure if u were getting my mails and anyway felt like reading it again. I was writing but u didnt reply...whether u didnt get my mails or i didnt get urs...when did u get my last email?just in case u dont get my reply. Hmm...bak to the poem, lol. I think it's really good and can i say this...damn my vocabulary..from all our convos...if i'd read this from another author it woulda reminded me of u..there! lol, i like it a lot, putting it on my faves...I'm all upset now..u think i wasnt writing, lol. Love, Mia
acccountkiller chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
AWESOME SENSATIONAL very good, great honestly, i loved it, it's very well written, and its a good think its long, there's more emotion and ppl get the message better. Twilight
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Wow. That was really really really really really good. I didn't mind the length, you packed in so much emotion, I think my favorite lines are the one:

I must destroy myself for my soul.

Is it worth the price,

This suicidal, masochristic sacrifice.

I know not but I must fight,

For that is the purpose of my life.

I liked this on a ton!

Thanks much for the review, could always use more ;-)

~Sexy Hobbit Chicklet
Voodoo Fyrefly chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
OK, i inpreted this as a struggle with your conscience or just the person you are. And I can certainly identify with that! The length is fine, the style is extremely cool, like an open narrative rather than just a poem. Great job

angellostinthedark i'm too lazy to log in lol chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
i wanted to let you know that this was simply...very well written and excellent. A true gift for words is what you've been given. -applauds-
bubblesbeccka chapter 1 . 1/29/2003
i really enjoyed the way the words twisted in my head. i know that didn't make sense to you but if the word twist in my head then the poem is excellent. your extreamly talented keep it up
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Long and good. I like it. It's well written.
DragonsEclipse chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
Nice! I like this! Hey, don't worry about the length of poems. Keep writing! _
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
Hey, don't worry about length. Lengthy poems are good. This was nicely written. Keep it up.~CT
Tanika chapter 1 . 12/28/2002
do not be sorry about the length it was good! um... at the beggining i was a bit lost but i re read it and realized that this was GREAT. very nice hunk of work you got here. good job!