Reviews for smoke
zendska not signed in chapter 1 . 12/26/2002
thats wonderful! a little window into human relationships...two souls in all their complexity barely brushing passed each other like bodies in a dark room...the dewtail of your description is so so good, little things a lesser writer leaves out made significant and beautiful...characterisation perfect even in this brevity. wonderful, wonderful!
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
Cigarettes are the ultimate cliche in poetry, your prose is unedited, it is a conversation leading to nowhere, it is to the unaided eye a thoughtful work, but it seems you make it up as you go.

Merry Christmas, and go get inspired.
toysoldier chapter 1 . 12/24/2002

All the talk about the eyes is just... great...

do you continue these, ever, or do you keep them just as they are?

this could be an end, a beginning, smack in the middle, or just as it is; It's beautiful whichever way. Glad to see you uploaded more.
ali was already taken chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
i really truly adored this - your style is refreshing. i wish i could write like this, in fact.