Reviews for Destroyed
Robs chapter 1 . 1/19/2003 can't read my reviews yet because your internet browser is done. I say, "Ha ha!"
aurias chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
On the whole, it looks and sounds very good.

Can I assume that 1, 2 and 3 are the settings of an ideal world.

One question, why does everyone hide?

And another note, it seem to give a feeling that the poem is about the beginning of time and how the world wasted.
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
It's sad when innocence is destroyed. I wrote something about a girl losing her innocence (not in the carnal way...) and called it Black From White. I definitely agree with you. Great poem. _
Yuki no Mitsukai chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
It's very very nice and very very good. I like the flow of the poem. -