|Reviews for today|
| Toadster chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
I've had these days...really almost perfect autumn days. Where everything is stupid but chin-up though, he will call. But you know, I've also had days when the sun is bright, and I just washed my hair, and he calls and breaks up with me, but I lock myself up and write about the grandeur of the world, with tears in my eyes...A very nice picture. Very nice.
| kealohikakahiaka chapter 1 . 2/4/2003
Good, very good. When I read this I had to sigh. I love the parallel sentence structures.
He better call.
| sweetspontaneous chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
if you had any idea how much i love (underlined, italicized, and bold) every single thing of yours that i have read...
this is good.
| Sakura chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
*is thinking really hard* where have i heard this before...?
| Kai chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
Its simple and sweet and sad.
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
ah wow, this is quite sweet, i can see the loneliness, but the underlying hope, ach it's so nice! very wonderful