Reviews for Two Boys, One Bird |
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![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome i loved the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... it's so cute! A fresh idea... not stale nor too original... great start. It makes you feel so cheerful inside. Hahaha... I'll be reviewing again when you next update! Good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story... a little out of the ordinary.. but I like it! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start, weird with the bird king though? continue i want to know what happens next -ryoko |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heyhey! What a cute story! It's really nice. Thanks for reviewing my story, chapter two is up (Him, Her and Another), if you'd like to read more! Keep up the good work, -puck- |
![]() ![]() This story is the ways of god. It's very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear, that was absolutely adorable. Too cute. _ Thanks for reviewing my work. -Bitter B. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really cute story. I like. |
![]() ![]() Such a nice lesson for naughty kids. Nice fic! |
![]() ![]() this would be good for naughty 's a fine work. |
![]() ![]() fantastic.A bit it fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a sweet and simple one...perhaps it would get more interesting if you are able to pen down a more detailed dream of the boys... _ |
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