wow...this is pretty badly written. the sentences should be broken up instead of going on and on. the dialog and thoughts should be more slang-y instead of like in an essay. you have made some grammar and spelling mistakes throughout and u should beta ur story.

other than that i find ur idea quite interesting.

ah! what's going to happen next? update soon!

All this just to make sure her family will be safe. Alexandra is a very strong girl... I admire her. Update soon

that evil... fill in the blank. good luck with finals and i hope you post another chapter when they're done!

ok, a cliffhanger... WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? update soon, i can't wait.

Wow, an update after so long. I wonder what will happen to Alexandra and Tim? Well, update soon.

So they fell in love with each other all in one day? Kinda fast aint it? And youve got some spelling mistakes and missing words from sentences.

When are you gonna update? I really really really wanna see what happens next. Please update soon.

SO sorry i haven't reviewed. My computer keeps breaking down. I have to say i'm very happy that you had them get back together quickly, i'm a hopeless romantic. And i like the plot twist.

so...Update much, yes? Thankies!Thankies! :D

The story is getting more and more 's too good.

I am really feeling scared for Alexandra, Tim and little Tim. Oh! Please don't kill them. Do somehow get rid off that cruel boss and make this story have a happy ending.

I beg you not to make this a tragedy. I would feel really down in the dumps if you do so.

Gravey. Me likes. But just a little constructive criticism. B4 you put up your chapters online, go through and check the story to make sure that you have no grammer problems. Also, go through a spell check too. Well I think thats all I have to say. Great story. Keep going.

~Star~

bum bum bum..."BeWaRe Someones BACK!" ...guess who's back, back agian ,shaddy's back tell a friend guess whos back guess whos back guess whos back danuhna...hehe sorry listing to eminem! update update update! i want to know whats gonna happen bum bum bum...great story keep it up!

I have one thing to say...OMG! i wasnt really expecting the ending ofthe chapter. very nice. do update soon.

This is a really good chapter... oh no! guess who back, back again _ update soon