Reviews for Defiled Innocence
Aragorn Hope chapter 1 . 2/5/2003
THis sucks balls, really big balls...

Mwhahahahaha

by-the-way i am a friend of jayne so :P

you will be ruined...
SydneyKate chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
That's a deep poem. How did you get that image? You haven't written in a while.
xo0Jayne0ox chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Didn't like it
Jonathan chapter 1 . 12/29/2002
Perfect title.

Almost like the clearest imagination, only too vivid to be just a dream. Perfect words, perfect description.
DefianceIsMe chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
This reminds me of one of my VERY dark poems Soiled...It's so sad when innocence is masacred.
Stormer chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
Wow, what a great job you did here of describing the person in the poem! You made really good use of words. Well done!
KrAeMiUaI chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
Wow! Great! Your poem is so great! From what i understood here, it's talking about women/girls/females? like a prostitute or something?... That's what i think... Sorry if my understanding is wrong... I just want to try reading and understanding poems...

*I wonder why only a few are reviewing in the poetry section?