Reviews for Puppet of Time
ButterfliKysses chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Wow, this is a wonderful poem! Its very meaningful, which makes up for its short-ness. You have a lot of talent! Will you check out my peoms, please? They're not very good but I'd love comments & suggestions!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
I loved it! Short and meaningful, a rare combination. Good work.
Anisky chapter 1 . 2/9/2001
Short, but to the point with a certain kind of power to it. I like it.
Raptis Chou Reev chapter 1 . 2/5/2001
wonderful
Silver Sparrow chapter 1 . 11/22/2000
your talented!im jealous!
Solthar Rygelsun chapter 1 . 11/20/2000
Thankyou. To be honest, this one poem originated as two seperate ones; however, i got this interesting idea about intertwining the poems, since they seemed to compliment each other - and came up with this. I also wish I could remeber the entirety of my first poem It's about smoke, but the word never occurs in it, and it was a whoping 12 verses long... it goes something like "Born of dancing flame / Dispersing through the air / It is the Dragons Bane / Fires everywhere"
Shorty Baby Cheeks chapter 1 . 11/18/2000
Wow. that's really good! Love the rhyming!
Laura chapter 1 . 11/17/2000
That was really good! short...but you made it count! i like your choices of words!