Reviews for superego in the attic
E. Gao chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
Bwahaha...Freud is another one of my strong(er) points (ever written anything about Jung?), so this actually made some inherent sense to my flotsam-addled mind. I love the name Gideon, although it's probably from some great piece of literature I've yet to read...and David too. But if I just imagine them as random characters it works as well, although probably not as vividly as if I knew exactly who they were.

Loved the second stanza.

Toadster chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
I love the David series!

and I like gideon on too, and the "leather hilt" imagery, that was the best.
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 12/29/2002
hmm. I like this one too, as you have such a way with words, but the attic? I don't know...*frowns a bit* For some reason I see the ego tucked away in the attic. Or perhaps even the id. Ach well, different interp. :) Beautiful poem nonetheless