Definitely seems realistic as to what suicidal people's thoughts might be..gonna go check out your other songs now :-)

In cried in the middle of my school library soo sad your a good writer keep at it

Pretty good song, interesting flow to it. Nice job

-Jessie

Thanks for the reviews guys, I really appreciate it!

Emoshun - You're right - I'll fix the rating, thanks for telling me. Thanks for the advice!

you can be a song wrighter, your better then my band and our songs... i thought we where good..

Lovely. I wish I could hear it to music...

I feel like that all the time... I dunno if I'm going to remain or not. Nice to know someone understands the feeling enough to write such a spiffy song.

. ...becca

very very good!

First of all, this should be rated pg-13. It is rated PG. Maybe that was a mistake? Overall it's good, but there's something that seems missing- maybe mystery. Somehow, it didn't seem as powerful as it could have. "I can't believe I almost died"- that was powerful, though. Also when you said that you were afraid- that was REALLY good. Try interviewing people who have tried (email me- I know people) and ask for their feelings. Overall, it was pretty good, I'm just a harsh reviewer, especially on suicide because it has special meaning to me (I won't elaborate in public) Keep up the good work!