Man, this is soo good! :D I haven't had time to look at all your stories and such, but this one is very good. It's sad, but it's hopeful too, I like it. I guess I just have a flying thing going, but I love the imagery of it up! ;)

That was simply stunning. Very short indeed but amazing. Kind of resembled poetry. But I know how you feel. Darn gravity! Why does it persistently plague us dreamers?

That pretty much depressed me wholly. But depression is like a warm blanket. It was quite good.

-Grooben

this is great! when you reviewed my poem "my wings have been clipped" you said in the review how you wish you could fly. interesting. i share the sentiment (thank you lizzy captain obvious!((

Aw. That was very moving! It seems that you feel depresed alot, like you have no place in life, but keep faith, everyone does, even me though I can hardly see it sometimes!

OoOoh deep. That is pretty good. Makes ya think...and with me that dont happen to often-'

hehheh. Well thats a really nice read!

that was really good! i like the allusions ... to something that i can't work out ...

thank you so much for reviewing my 'major work' (yes, title is lacking). i hereby PROMISE that a nother chapter will be forthcoming. :D

Well, it definately applies to me. ::chuckle:: I really like the whole analogy with flying - really gives the sense of freedom and the abillity to escape from all that we are trapped within. Wonderful.