Reviews for I'm Just Holding My Breath
Deana Bell chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
I like the contradictions.

~God bless~
stabbed-n-broken chapter 1 . 5/16/2003
I love this poem.

Everyone I think can relate to your poem.

It's so good. I wish I wrote it! Damn I got compittion. lol

THis poem was very well written. Please continue writing and spread your wings I know you'll fly...
Psycogirl chapter 1 . 4/12/2003
I'm surprised no-one has reviewed this. its very good, I like the metaphor of holding your breath and waiting for the oppurtunity to be with someone. very good job on this. some real thought behind it, I think.