Reviews for Reflections
Rainbow Warrior chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
Whoah. Thats a reallly impressive one. Nice job.
bib chapter 1 . 1/5/2003
wow, ein wenig verwirrend aber eine sehr eindrucksvolle Schreibweise.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
wow, very powerful and pretty, well written too, i do believe that this is one of your best, i love it, great job
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
Beautifully written- nice rhyme and rhythm.

'Do you see the colours changing/ as I begin to think of you?' thoughtful and interesting lines.

'Do you see the same in me?' questioning, almost-accusing, but softer than that. More like trying to make someone realise themselves.

Last 2 stanza are very strong 'what if it would shatter' and thought provoking 'if you knew you'd see the same'.

Profound and intellegent- very interesting to think about.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
Wow...this is awesome!

Thanks so much for the reviews, too.

I really liked this...!

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
Du schaffst es immer wieder, dass mir ein Schauer beim Lesen deiner Gedichte über den stoffpferdlichen Rücken lä!
Needa S chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
Excellent! Keep writing!
Lisa Robinson chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
Wow. Profound. _ Great Job! If you find the time, Please check out my poem 'In The World' Thanks!
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