Reviews for The Other Place
spunkiegirl chapter 4 . 6/1/2004
I hope not!
I feel bad for poor Anson. First his friend gets petrified then he gets shot with arrows. He has terrible luck.
spunkiegirl chapter 3 . 4/24/2003
I thought things moved a little quickly, I agree that more detail would be good, but that's my only complaint. I hope Anson can save Jack. :)
bubabaloo chapter 3 . 1/28/2003
This is very good! One suggestion, is try to use more description. I'm DEFINITELY obsessed with description.

But besides that, I really liked that!
bubabaloo chapter 2 . 1/3/2003
That's good! The detail's pretty good, you could use more. But I like it over all!

Keep going. a word of advice, never leave the people hanging too long. XD!
bubabaloo chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
I like it! *sees there's another chapter and scurries off to read it*
Spades chapter 2 . 1/2/2003
I'm interested in it so far but I don't know where you're going with it. I don't know what the climax is going to be or what the two of them are going for. Maybe I just lost it in the reading, that is very possible to. But keep writing, I'll keep my eyes open for the next chapter.
spunkiegirl chapter 1 . 1/1/2003
It's pretty interesting so far, so yeah, please continue.