Reviews for Can't Hold On Forever
a e i o u and sometimes y chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
How very depressing. Probably because it triggered memories in my mind. I can relate to this...a lot. Good write D
Might you R&R some of my work? I'd appreciate it if you did
Shade2 chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
Aww, sad (ish). I like your poetry/writing, it's interesting without shoving it down the reader's throat. Not bad, not bad at all.
SoulessFreedom chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Damn, how old are you again? This was very impressive and moving for poetry. I NEVER read poetry, but for the few that i do read, this is great!

(Btw, cool name...)
R.A. Sears chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
Sounds like this was inspired by something I told ya, eh? It does hurt to realize that your friends won't listen to you anymore, especially when you're right and they don't realize it.