ahahhahahaha... thats jokes! did ur friend read it? i wonder what he'd say. my only suggestion is that u write everything on different lines so it'll look more like a poem. its pretty short and funnie, although im into more deep poems. iono why, dunt ask, lolz. btw thanks a bunch for reviewing SO MANY of my fics and giving me such positive feedback. i really appreciate it. ttyl

-gots ta be takari's baybee