Reviews for Through the Night |
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![]() ![]() Hiatus is most certainly the correct term for how long its been since you updated this. I would like to say though, that I really like this story and would love to see it taken off the backburner and given all the time love and consideration it deserves. You have great characters, a good plot, and a lot of potential. Please finish this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I finally got back to r&r. Good job. The chapters are short, though, and kind of...well, lacking "filling." You know, more description? But that might be just my opinion. Other then that, it's a great story line so far. Personally, I think the lady is Alastair's mother...but that's just my crooked sense of humor speaking, isn't it? Well, post more soon-even if I'm not back immediately to review. Good job, write more soon, etc. BTW, you have really good grammar-do you have a beta or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, you. The past few chapters have had me laughing. Nice job. I really like Eliton! She's cool! Reminds me of Sue... Broom Girl! *squeels* Funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hooray for the broom girl! my sympathys for the uncordinated alastair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() evil lady in trouble. shame shame, her not being thourough(spelling?) with her job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() he he, hair diddles. tell alex to take a picture next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, Alastiar is fired from any futher navigation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex sounds like me, constantly running into door frames. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shame shame. the two of them alone in that house. |
![]() ![]() ![]() guiter chords are evil! but this is a good start to a story |
![]() ![]() ![]() All right, this has to be one of the best fics i ever read, this is amazing, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good interaction between Alex and Alastair! I'll keep on reading ! |
![]() ![]() Teehee! Poor Alistairgot attcked by the broom girly. *shakes head* The girls are falling over him. AINA! oh, very good chappy! Please put the next chappy up soon! |
![]() ![]() *Sniggers* Do you have to ask why she's flirting with him? Honestly, I think Alex has been with him too long. She isn't fully appreciating his good looks! Well! *Grins* Yay for new chapters! Yay for wonderful authors! Yay for pancakes! Well, must go, can't stop to ramble on and on delightedly. See you. *Nabs Alastair and RUNS* |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, cute. Oh Alastair, how the lady's love him. lol. Good job! Love the broom girl! lol |