Hey,

Excellent work. Really good i'd like to read more of this, everything is extremely interesting and you definetly need to write more fics! _

Ciao

ps. Excellent work, Write more! :)

mmoooooooore

Dear Gods, thats fabulous! I DEMAND a sequal!

~Kisses

John

I agree. This rocked... I only wish I could write so well.

very well done. its always a pluss that there r not many mistakes in spelling and grammer. i like the plot. r u gonna do any more storys along this line? i hope that u do.

sad! i don't read slash ever.. but hey... good job, nice idea! :*( sad though

This is good.

Correction: more than good, this is beautiful. The absence of names, just Sir and Doll, the sad ending...

Correction: this is incredibly beautiful.