Hmm. The ending of this chapter leads me to believe that Rivers' so-called friends are going to seemingly forget about her. It's good that her mother took action and is getting her help. Even though Rivers is extremely mad at her mom right now, she'll thank her later. If she's still alive, that is. Nicely done.
Update soon! _~

So sad.
Update soon.

TIS SAD! *cries*

wow wow wow wow wow wowowowowow
this is fucking amazing!
the way you describe everything blows me away. i utterly speecless...one of the best on here...please please send to a publisher!

I like Kyle, he should stay with Rivers! Continue soon!

How can she think that Jackson didn't rape her? He took advantage of her. But, it's understandable that she doesn't want to rememebr her first time as having occured from rape. It's good that Kyle isn't mad at her. At least, he seems like he isn't. Rivers really does need to quit modeling. She might end up dying because of her lack of eating.
Keep writing! And, update soon! _

Uh oh. I hope she doesn't have to quit modeling, though it'd probably make her a better person. That'd only be after she stopped being depressed over it, hah. And why is she all yay Jackson? Weird girl.

I don't think my review sent the last time...anyway, I've been reading this for awhile under various names, and I love the realistic characters. It sounds like maybe she's in denial about the rape thing, or maybe not? Kinda hard to tell at this point. Only Jackson really knows, I guess. I really love Rivin. ~ Edie

Well, it's good to have you back. Yes, I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting. This story has a lot of twists and turns, and I'm curious what is going on exactly, but I also know sometimes even the author doesn't have a clue. So, good luck on the next chapter, keep up the character development...Rivers is changing, don't make it too fast. Just suggestions. Don't leave loose ends! Looking forward to the next installment!

hey! oh, of course I'm still reading your story. This one happens to be a fave of mine. Something that I can really relate to. After all, I have an eating disorder and I want to be a model more than anything right now. Nothing too important happened in this chapter, but it was good that way. You left it with suspense and you caught everyone up. I didn't forget what was going on, but a little reminder never hurt anyone. People need to be reminded after a while of not reading, myself included.
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Christie

great job! this is amazing! i love your work!

I love this story! I'm obsessed with it..:P

Ohh..what's she gonna doo? Heheh, continue soon!

Wow...another one of your great storied. I have to say this is beautifully written. I know quite a few people who've had, or have an eating disorder, and i think you've written it amazingly. I wish I had your talent for writing. Your characters as so awesome too, i absolutely LOVE Kyle, i really hope she ends up with him, and Jenna's cool too. (two of my best friends names are Kyle, and Jenna so thats neat) And Rivin seems like a great brother...ah yes, I'll let you go now, but i hope you update soon, 'cause this story rocks! :0)
Kisses*Kate*

Well, of course Jackson is denying what he did to Rivers. No one ever likes to be accused of anything, and he wants to maintain his innocent act. I hope Brynn will be all right. As for Rivers, I hope things work out for her, though it seems like everything is going to go to hell and back before that happens. At least she has Kyle. I just hope that he doesn't hurt her, too. Great job! Update soon! _