Reviews for You Never Told Me
HomeFry chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
wow, this is a pretty powerful poem. it's not right when children are left in the dark as to what their mom or dad have been up to. i love it, however i can't relate.

*thanx for the review*
restless-wandering chapter 1 . 5/10/2003
*sniffle* so sad, especially the last line... but like i say, whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger right?

*vanishes into air molecules*
loseconsciousness-dzryt chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
very good but confusing...y did he haf to lie to her about the job? maybe its jus me...thx for ur reviews...i hav another poem almost like the *Just some Girl* poem, but really long, and some parts don't seem to fit together...so once i get dat done, i'll post it up. i jus toldja dat cuz u seem to really like my stuff..i find my stuff really weird, but glad to hav someone liking them D thx! _
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Long and good. I like it.
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
Pretty good song. Nice flow and good phrasing. You can tell it's heartfelt and that it's pretty good. Great job

-Jessie
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
that's so sad that that stuff really happened...