|Reviews for Even More Alone|
| bubabaloo chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
I liked it! Keep up the good work! My favorite part was
"Why do you want me
"Why don't I want you"
I thought that was kinda funny. heh, it reminded me of how I feel when this annoying guy at school wont leave me alone.
the only suggestion I have, is try to work on your punctuation. That's about it. - k! bye!