Reviews for Even More Alone
bubabaloo chapter 1 . 1/3/2003
I liked it! Keep up the good work! My favorite part was

"Why do you want me

"Why don't I want you"

I thought that was kinda funny. heh, it reminded me of how I feel when this annoying guy at school wont leave me alone.

wonderful poem!

the only suggestion I have, is try to work on your punctuation. That's about it. - k! bye!