|Reviews for Cold Mistrust|
| aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
A very rare and beautiful poem. Very bitter. It really says alot about what you've gone through. I can sadly relate. I especially love the strong descriptive word choice.
| Naruke chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Outer self: did that person stab you?
Inner self: no, you idiot! he just betrayed her! (you are a she and the person youre talking about is a guy, right?)
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Short, but this was intense. You presented some good images to get your point across.
Heart of the Sword
| Bekll chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Eh. That sends a chill up my soul. It's deep and powerfully vivid and sickening.
It's rated G?
| rosepetal1077 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
| Obliquity chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
| Ukiah chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
I like this one, very powerful and descriptive in how painful it is to lose any trust you placed in a close friend.
Something terrible must've happened to bring it to this point.
| axania chic chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
o powerful really angry good poem really good
| Evelyn Hayden chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
I love your poems, they're so great, deep, and awsome
| triskaidekaphobia chapter 1 . 1/27/2003
Oooh the imagery there is powerful
| kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
great poem! really nice.
| Knife Fighter chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
thats goooood... to put it mildly
i know what that feels like...
| Crispy chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
| the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
Excellent imagery, very chilling. I can relate to this a lot, so it just makes the poem all the more vivid.
Keep writing! Peace
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 1/8/2003
another painful one, but i really love this one though, short, but says a lot, and expresses your anguish beautifully