Reviews for Cold Mistrust
aquamoon222 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
A very rare and beautiful poem. Very bitter. It really says alot about what you've gone through. I can sadly relate. I especially love the strong descriptive word choice.
Naruke chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Outer self: did that person stab you?

Inner self: no, you idiot! he just betrayed her! (you are a she and the person youre talking about is a guy, right?)
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Short, but this was intense. You presented some good images to get your point across.

Heart of the Sword
Bekll chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Eh. That sends a chill up my soul. It's deep and powerfully vivid and sickening.

It's rated G?
rosepetal1077 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
creepy...
Obliquity chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
...Wowie.

*Hug*
Ukiah chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
I like this one, very powerful and descriptive in how painful it is to lose any trust you placed in a close friend.

Something terrible must've happened to bring it to this point.
axania chic chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
o powerful really angry good poem really good

axy
Evelyn Hayden chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
I love your poems, they're so great, deep, and awsome
triskaidekaphobia chapter 1 . 1/27/2003
Oooh the imagery there is powerful
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 1/24/2003
great poem! really nice.
Knife Fighter chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
wow...

thats goooood... to put it mildly

i know what that feels like...
Crispy chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Deep
the Queen of Jupiter chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
Excellent imagery, very chilling. I can relate to this a lot, so it just makes the poem all the more vivid.

Keep writing! Peace
not sure yet chapter 1 . 1/8/2003
another painful one, but i really love this one though, short, but says a lot, and expresses your anguish beautifully
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