Reviews for Game of Life
aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
lol..someone's been playing too many board games! heehee I must admit I write pretty lame poems so I can't really be talking! keep writing and posting more poems and original stuff.
Just Wolf chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
I enjoyed this poem as it had a very original theme, which describes life very well.

My only problem with it was that it was a little repatitive. I thought that the opening was excellent.

I think that the poem was a little too long with lines that could easily be cut out. However, it was interresting and funny which kept it fom being boring.
Emma Forrest chapter 1 . 1/4/2003
The ending kills, I love it. Though in some parts the poem is less interesting, cut it down a bit and it'll be perfect. Sorry if I'm acting like a poetry snob, I really don't mean to. I couldn't write anything like this. It's incredible.