I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

OH MY GOD. YOU UPDATED. After, like, what? AT LEAST 5 MONTHS? Well, anyway, VERY GOOD chapter. Seriously. It was almost worth the wait! Lol. Anyway, great job. Keep writing!

how in the heck do i do that faery munchkin?

Instead of saving it as a doc. do it as an internet or web page. That should work. Have fun. I really do enjoy this. Please continue and Thank you for sharing your gift.

Aw it looks like u haven't updated in a while. u wanna know what i think. Of course u do. I think you should get ur little hinney on that computer of yours & update!
This story is too good end. Please update!
I love it.
Toodles
~Jolly B

o! i like joey! um, it is a dez/joey couple, isnt it? rite? rite? sorry. a little thick today. could you pwease pwease update?

All I can say is...wow! And no I am not just saying that cuz I am...me! I love Lilly, and yes she is a lot like me! I really love the father/daughter scene, that was precious. And Joey had better not end up with Lilly! And that whole name thing is...different! I can't wait for more! love ya twinny!

awesome story so far, has potential.

KB

Hey this is good so far...I really like Joey!

o, I want him. lol, I love this, You must write more soon!

~Mel

I like so far! I cannot wait to read more

hey great story am really enjoying it, please update soon, looks as thought it gonna be awesome, please update BUHBAI!

hm...again. Things get more interesting, so...Im gonna put this on my favorites list! (now you say 'yay')

~Stephen

hm...lost of talking, but thats cool. Im not sure where its going, so I'll review the rest for sure.

Completely awesome! Don't tell me that Lilly and Joey get together! I cannot call you my best friend if this happens! Where did you get Lilly's personality, she is so great!