This is very good! You should continue the story.

Awesoem story! Much enjoyed! felt bad for Wolfgang though, heh.

Good job, man. Very well constructed piece of work, and it gave off a good vibe, ya know? I liked your descriptions and your language, though sometimes you could be a little heavy-handed (i.e. the final line, which cheapened the story a little for me). Still I like your work, Gale. You've got a good feel for writing, in my opinion. I hope that maybe I can learn something for you.

Now THAT was cool!

I love this tale! I expessally enjoyed the ironic ending...you have quite a talent for good story telling I must say its been awhile since i've read a good horror story but this was definatly worth it :)

actually, it's Der Kingerstod with an unglaut over the 'o.' I'm aware of that. Unfortunately, my keyboard doesn't type those, so I settled for a spelling that sounded it out.

It's not 'Der Kinderstoed' It's 'Der Kinderstod'

But yea, good story.

I don't think that I'll be able to sleep tonight . . .

O.O Holy fuck. That was amazing. The description-I cringed at the part where the little girl sank her teeth into Sven's arm-and...and just everything. You're amazing! :D:D:D Great work!

Squeee! I love this! At first it came across as a really average ghost story and blah...but the ending made it so worth it! I love vampires, this kicks serious ass. XD

Wow!

Is that it?

Can you please continue, seriously?

I admire your descriptions and portrayal of your characters, please write more!

Please?

Continue this?

Pwease?

Wow, I love this. Beautifully written. I told you, you could manage it. And here is the fruit of that work. I salute three Galey-can