Reviews for PS I Love You
vlnplyr2 chapter 23 . 8/6/2006
very good... me gusta mucho...Write more!
Ebony chapter 22 . 7/18/2006
lol. i cant belive how much ur uplaoding! its frecken me out. lol. but i lvoe it. how weird. yep that was what htey needed. i still think they need to have more talking but, before this chapter it seemed like they only lusted each chapter changes that butgood work
Ebony chapter 21 . 7/18/2006
ha ha teasing is such a bitch. lol. good on adam for it but. lol. they have over comet he first step of being awkward around each other. yay. need romance i recon. and deep and meaningfull. but its hard to write that without draging onany way it was a good chap
Ebony chapter 20 . 7/17/2006
yer i read adams story, it sounded so inocent but. lol i have a fav quote from this chapter, "she learned that he had more action and less food on his mind." its great. lol. The nick names were funny, like slit, and member. i think that the two might need a bit more conversation going on between them. conversationsa t the begining of relationships are always funny. and fun to right to. but great work it was a very...graphic chap. lol
Ebony chapter 19 . 7/16/2006
another loverly update, a bit short though. and kinda weird about the whole getting the other guys in the band to have male love making with adam... hm. to u when u next update. love, me
Ebony chapter 18 . 7/14/2006
aw, how cute. however jamie is such a slut. lol. im so impressed witht eh updates, u must be on a role! i like eveything thus far, great contraversy, however i wouldlike to know the story about nick. that his name right? jamie's ex? any way untill the next updatepeice out
ebony chapter 16 . 7/13/2006
wtf? lol, that was like a totle 360 to what i thought would happen, its well...interesting, it could go many way's, all with massive negitive's and positive's, but jamie is a bit of a minger( if you dont know what htat means its kinda like a trashy scrag)
ebony chapter 15 . 7/13/2006
aw that was a good chapter, wow 2 updates in the one day, i like how they told lucas, it was good coz like, them doing it together stops the true story going astray. any way, i'm gonna read the next chapter now.
AroseFORtheDEAD chapter 14 . 7/3/2006
good story keep updating
ebony chapter 14 . 6/29/2006
what the hell is jamies problem? lol. i would be frustrated, not upset. save upset for when she gets cheated on, or somthign like that. lol. its good that you have added the difficultys of dating someone in a band, coz i recon it would suck with there secedual. but still, im looking forward to more. oh btw, im also random monkeys, its just im to lazy to sign in. lol. read some of my story, tell me what you think
alicia chapter 2 . 3/3/2006
ew. uhm yea im sorry to break it to u. but yea. ur kinda ugly and fat...and based on this story...u think ur all that. ew? the whole damn story is basiclaly "im cool and pretty and guys love me" mmhmm..
Nyah4 chapter 13 . 10/22/2005
That is such a cute story. It is very sad, that you are not continueing this. I would really love to read more :)
ebony chapter 13 . 6/4/2005
HELLO! FINISH this or die. it is really good!if u need help i would love to give you some sugestions. to contact me my email
Katherine Hesnar chapter 12 . 4/17/2005
“Adam pulled into the old bowling alley's” which old bowling alley? “The person working the hut was overly friendly towards Adam; we have our suspicions that he was gay.” wow… a bit of pointless info
Katherine Hesnar chapter 11 . 4/17/2005
“ashamed know she thought it “-? What? Dude, capitalization issues! -“deal. honestly” “again the duo said good-bye and hung up the phone”—sounds like you changed POV weird Argh on that sentence! “Jamie and Adam walked outside and got into Adam's car and began the drive to downtown where they would spend the afternoon together. in public.” 3rd person & capitalize the end.
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