well the end was dramatic wasn't it? But clear and to the point. That's good.. don't beat around the tree.. or bush.. flower.. dog.. whatever. :P Close minded people aren't too keen on listening to other peoples point of views a lot of times... and that's not very good. They base their reacts or thoughts on what family.. religion.. and other things. It's always a smart idea to be open minded and about everything. I try to be that way.. although sometimes I can be close minded about certain types of music.. bleh. - I enjoyed your poem, it's direct and also full of some sadness and pain and anger. Meditate with Wu Fei... actually maybe I should do more of that too. :D Ok.. that's enough from me. Write some more stuff.. Laters!

As far as pure venting goes, this poem is decent. It feels childish though; the meaning of poems and stories at their core are to bring new perspective in the world, and you do nothing to work towards this goal. Instead of analyzing the people around you, or trying to understand their admittively petty behavior, you simply say they "suck." This disappoints me.

Suck? SUCK? You're making me feel like a toddler trying to write da letter "a" o

*sniffle* I feel so bad for you. This was sweet though...

That was beautiful.. _ *huggle* I feel the same way... I'll never leave you either... I just wish you'd write more stuff like that... You can be so cute sometimes... _

Love you,

Suki-chan