Reviews for Stop and Drop
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Hey if you fixed the formatting up on this a bit it would be a pretty good poem. Thats pretty good though for an old version as you call it, i take it that its one of your earlier poems. -Keith Andrew
Will Klemm chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
let me first off thank you for reviewing my poem, Getting rid of you. It's very much appreciated.
Your poem is a little confusing only because the setup is all as if it were a story. So trying to find the end and beginning of thoughts is a little bit difficult.
I really liked the end of it because the message it conveys about being dropped, i've felt that way quite alot by different people. Great job
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
good job, I would suggest to put in paragraphs just so people can read it and understand it easier, but you did warn me before hand. Good work though.