Reviews for destiny's call
DarkAngel202884 chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
Very well written and the title is a perfect match for the poem. _
Lounalune chapter 1 . 4/20/2003
Another great and creepy poem... I just love it. It's suprizing how well u can write in English, even though it's not your first language.
hauntedshryne chapter 1 . 4/11/2003
again...powerful...you are definately going onto my favorite authors list
Kris chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Wow, I like it! *shrugs* Made sense to me. I like the image of the dark gate and a battle lacking glory. Interesting. _
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
This is sort of...dark, isn't it? Who is "she"? Or do you even know?
Creative Deficit chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
you're right... I don't really understand it. But hey! its a good poem. I read about three times, I like it. Yesh, was trying to make sense of it... I understood what you told me, I don't know if tehre is something deeper, that it resembles... yesh, well

the Laura
Hopes Forgotten chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
Good, I don't know what to say about it.
Needa S chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Cool! Good job! K/writing!
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
Nice!

Determined and excited, not really showing any fear even though things look so stern 'the great hate/-closed and black', 'coldly summon me'.

Very strong and heroic 'I will die fighting/ in a battle where/ glory's not involved'.

Interesting little piece, eyes shining, heart pounding and determination in every bone.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 1/15/2003
Nice work!

~Heart of the Sword
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
Great piece. Interesting but really awesome. Like the part "in front of the great gate -closed and black-" Great job

-Jessie
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 1/9/2003
Cool...erinnert mich irgendwie an LotR *in front of the great gate, -closed and black-*...aber nciht nur deswegen gefällts mir *g* Wie machst du das nur immer wieder? Egal was du aufschreibst, es berührt einen zutiefst und stimmt einen nachdenklich...*seufz*
not sure yet chapter 1 . 1/8/2003
very interesting, i like it though, sorta tells a lil story, good job
monsterbreaker chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Wow, this was deep. I like the lines "so I will die fighting/in a battle where/glory's not involved"- It just is so strong and moving.

~me~