Reviews for Hunger
Gandella Raye chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
'tis sublte, really like the last line:

'but i defy' powerful
Ares-Artemis chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
VERY broad. very subtle, very vague

i like it. i can translate it to anything i like. i think this one's good. not too mushy, not too gothic, just broad. good job!
Rachel chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
I think it's pretty good the way it is. There is really no need to add to it(just in case you're still planning to add more.)