Reviews for Wheat Fields
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
I cried.

EG
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 1/20/2003
This sounds like an excellent portrayal of the time - though I wouldn't know, the feeling and capture of the Wheat Fields drive the prose to something I can grasp.
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 1/16/2003
Writers should be good at poetry or prose. Not both. *hates you for being able to do both*

(Not really. Write more!)
Galadriel3 chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
This is a really good story. I like the description of war not liking youth at the beginning. The ending is so sad!
Tethys-Orion chapter 1 . 1/11/2003
This is too sad for words. What can I say? I love your use of repetition throughout the piece; that makes it seem more poetry than prose; it's well done. But oh it is so sad, Rose.