Yay! With Alex there, the nurse or whoever is in charge of medicine at Lexus wouldn't lift her shirt to examine how hard she was bruised or something. Is she claustrophic? And I'm glad for further differentiation of Kaede's and Adrian's personality. :D

Izzy J.

One typo. "He had big muscles which couldn't seem to be covered by the school uniform, cuts and bruises all over the exposed skin, an ugly red scar across her forehead, and he was tall." Should be HIS forehead. Hee hee. I'm glad she kicked his ass.

Oh, my. She gets to see him half-naked and he sounds like a hunk from the earlier chapters. No offense, but I've read many stories about a female masquerading as a guy and they ALWAYS walk in on them half-naked in a towel. *sigh* Kinda old...

I like the revelation about the cherry blossom tree. Is there a specific legend to it, with people, or is its magic and mystery in its full-year bloom?

Izzy J.

Didn't really move the story forward, but I guess we learned a few new things about Neo. And it is kinda amusing how much attention Andre attracts.

Izzy J.

Evil cliffie. And since this is in the fantasy..hmm...is he, like, an actual fallen angel? That'd be cool...

Izzy J.

Hey...wait..isn't BMG a big music company?

Anyway, this chapter really talks about how others are affected by Andrea's wrath and the coolness of Fallen Angel, but I really do hope that we see further characterization of the main people. Kaede, Ethan and Adrian are Nicholas' classmates, right?

Izzy J.

Neo, eh? Sounds familiar. *wink* Good chapter, and introducing the members of the band.

Izzy J.

Sobering, realizing why Andrea feels uneasy around boys. However, having her disguised as a boy, and having her hear how boys talk in private about girls or whatever may not exactly be the healthiest way to get over her fear. I'd like to know more about her brother. :)

Izzy J.

another great chapter...sorry if i don't review for every chapter! Very creative, can't wait to see what happens next! You shall hear from me again! _

great chapter! now i gotta read the rest, but keep up your great writing!

great story! great chapter! i can't wait to read the rest of the story!

expect to here from me again!

OOh, I likey! V. good. sounds like a fun story-I'll continue it later when I have time *comes back in 800 years*

~Kiara

my gosh

ur an excellent writer

it would b so cool if i could write as well as u did...

-_-;

I'll add to the 10 reviews and say WOW...this is incredible. I can't wait to read more.

onigod i would do anything to be Andrea right now lol

oh getting interesting there might just have to keep reeading...lol