Reviews for Operation BMG: The New World
Annie chapter 27 . 10/1/2003
Wow! cool story man, i love it. this is the first best story i so far on fictionpress.
hearthands chapter 26 . 9/14/2003
Bloody Hell! That was amazing! I love your story! I can't wait to read Stage Two! Off I go...
scenicmoods chapter 26 . 9/8/2003
hey i really liked your story and cant wait for stage two but though i sometimes confused because of the other names that they have umbra and penumbra it would be great if you had a bit where you would link them to the other names of theirs but fantastic story otherwise.
CCS Fic Reader chapter 27 . 8/27/2003
WHOA... dude... gotta say man... you write some good stuff!

... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... I'm speechless... one of the best stories yet on fictionpress!


I anticipate STAGE 2 of OPERATION BMG STAGE 1!

bye now!

gotta say kid... you've got talent... (now don't think I'm old... I am 14 years old!)

Everyone loves praise now and then... hell! I live for it! ha ha!
bunny chapter 27 . 8/25/2003
ok, I forgot to do this, but now I'm going to dub your story. (it's different everytime!) And your story is a...,

Feathered Turtle! Combineing the Hard exterior and soft interior of real life with some magic to reach new hieghts!
Sheeba chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
I like it so far! :) I know I am reviewing this chapter, but I'm all the way to chapter 12 and its stuck so I'll com eback later and read more! I love Neo and his description! He sounds HOT! :)
Lappy chapter 27 . 8/20/2003
Oh my gosh! This has got to be possible one of my favorite stories on fictionpress to date! Goodness! Loved the first stage ... I'm gonna start reading the second one as soon as possible! ~_ Later and keep up the writing!
Secretive chapter 1 . 8/16/2003
Andrea is so COOL! I dunno, for some reason a girl beating on her father is Whatever, I like your story a lot and can't wait to see what happens. What would it be like to live in an all boy's school? I guess I'm not like alotta girls cause I'm pretty sure that would freak me out. Afraid of being caught and everything. Anyways, I love your story and I'm gonna finish it. I'll be reading! And I've never read Hanakimi, is it any good?
La petite malaine chapter 15 . 8/8/2003
you're story is driving me insane... and I like it... you have a difficult task set before you,with a mainly male cast of characters, how do you bring in romance? Well, homosexuality is as good as any other sexuality... good call, most people are too stiff to use all tools and angles that a story can be worked from, you don't seem to be.


La petite malaine chapter 14 . 8/8/2003
This story is twisting insanely! In the best way possible, i assure you...

La petite malaine chapter 9 . 8/8/2003
that was harsh, I hope there is something absolutely wrong with neo that makes him such a jerk...
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La petite malaine chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
WHo the hell is nicholas parker?

okay, forgiven.

Now, continue writting because this is a good concept and I really am enjoying it so far... and hopefully will continue to do so.

Auraceen chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Nice chapter

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