YAY! can't wait til you post it! i'll be forever haunting until it is uploaded. hehehe i've throughly enjoyed stage one and will continue to read it in holidays and stuff...so yah...thanks for being a great author! though its natural...i really can't wait~!

hell. you finally finished a part! A PART! OMG... that's like, a real improvement! I'm so proud of you! _ *grins from ear to ear*

Anyway, sorry if i took so long to review... couldn't get my hands on a damned-decent-enough computer. I need to turn over THIS computer to my sis in the next five minutes as it is. So I'll try to make this short and to the point.

Well, around chapters 20 - 24, i kind of thought that you'd gone looney in that head of yours. Really weird stuff, i tell ya - but quite amusing and entertaining. Then I read chapters 25 and 26... and i was like... WOW. Great conversations, great wording, huge improvement with everything! I got all tingly with the A/N (short for andrea and neo, if you want to know ;p) scene and I bit my nails while reading the Adrian and Kaede thing. (I mean, hell, you of all people know that i'm not too inclined towards gay relationships but i had to admit, that was GOOD writing _~) I just laughed at the cheesy lines though. heehee. (*mimicks Adrian* 'Will you be mine?") BWAHAHAHA! *wipes tear from eye*

maybe those summer review classes works. *evil grin* joke. Anyway, totally great job, keep it up, and if you don't start on the second stage by monday (my day of arrival) i'll personally throttle you and even worse... i won't give you the scruptiddlyditious chocolates that i bought as pasalubong. *evil grin grew wider* Well, laterz! Call ya when i get home! _ (let's have an anime marathon! yehey! joke ;p)

Ja, my friend! _

p.s. that Gabe guy that inspired the name for her brother? saw him here. Two sentences.

Ugh. How the hell did I find him cute? *barfs all over computer*

i love your story but i was woundering if your going to continue and how much farther are you going to go? when will you end this story? its becoming so 'interesting' although i wish to finish reading your never-ending story, so i'm looking forward to the next chapter, PLEASE finish the next chaper and so on!...

i just found this story a few days ago

so i def'natly have not been around

...but i just wanted to say this is

a wonderful story.i think u could

probably even publish it,if u don't

want to that'd be cool...but i'l be

look'in out any THANKS!

ok, first I have something to ask/suggest to you. I think that you should sell this story. Or any other stories you have written, because if thier anywhere near as good as this one, you good become richer than Bill Gates. You could like, put little bits of your stories on a website, and then hook up with paypal, so you could sell your stories online. I mean, your bank account would just get so much money, you could buy a mansion. Or a really big swimming pool. Or a mansion with a really big swimming pool. Anyway, just hook up with paypal okay?

Second thing. I'm really really really really really REALLY, impatient for the next stage, but will probably commit suicide before I get there, due to lack of good stories. But I try to hold on.

*beffudled* W-what? But... I thought you said that Stage Two would be... YOU know... *wiggles eyebrows* ANDRE...

~Lanti~

P.S. Shimatta! I can't log in on or anymore!

Hello. Stage II sounds like fun, I hope it comes soon (hint hint nudge nudge [you get the picture right]). The Evil Exams are coming! Head for the Hills (or at least an exam proof bubble)! Question?- Is there going to be an evil villian bad guy type person in Stage II for this one lacked the whole evil dude (or dame, does not matter), but was still breathtaking. A really good story on fictionpress is a story called Blessing and Curse, I recomend it. bye and do you have an exam proof bubble I could hide in for a while?

Oh,cool. Go Camry!

Wait... that means the story is one-third over? :( But at least it's not over yet! :) I am one of those people who check up on your story on a regular basis. _ And guess what? Today you almost have 10 reviews! I am going to try and be the 10th reviewer! (For lack of anything else better to do.) Oh yeah, and I can't forget the daily death threats. IF YOU SUDDENLY GIVE UP ON THIS STORY I WILL THREATEN YOU! _ By the way, that was a compliment.

Wow, this was a long review!

-PoleKat

P.S. Wow! You're still reading this! Don't you ever get sick of it?

I would not have enjoyed stage one as much as I did if you were not as talented as you are. You have a wonderful sense of emotions and how to portray them, as well have you got a talent for knowing how much is too much and how to balance your story with description and dialogue (I probably didn't spell that right). I have loved reading Stage One, and am anxiously awaiting Stage Two. I do understand how it is with school interfering with writing. I often neglect my fanfiction during school because I have two stories I am mainly working on and scores that are just ideas that could be, so I only really have time for one story during school, and still not much for even that. I do hope you still enjoy writing, that is key in creating a good story. If you love your characters, your audience will as well. I hope you take care.

PerfectSoldier09

Congrats Camry and I can't wait for the next part of the story. I know how it feels to not finish a story... You are a fabulous writer and I expect to see you published one day. I love this story!

Stage One's over already? Oh, that was slightly unexpected. But cool. It makes sense since you can kind of end the Neo-thinks-Andrea-is-Andre-and-isn't-with-her era and more into the Neo-knows-Anread-is-Andrea-and-IS-with-her place. I'm hoping you'll finally start explaining this Umbra/Penumbra business to us, yes?

I'm very excited for Stage Two. Sad it won't be out incredibly soon. Are you going to post it as a new story or just keeping posting on this one? Was just wondering.

And I definitely understand why you don't want to replay to reviews anymore now. I've been thinking about stopping lately too. It's just annoying when you're like, "Yay, I've finally finished the chapter! But, oh, damn it, I still have to do my stupid replies!" So, yeah, I know how you feel on that one.

By the way, thanks for the email whenever you sent it (can't remember). It's nice that you took the time. And I'll continue my role as mini-incubator through this whole story as long as you don't mind. As I've said, I'm one of those very odd people who enjoys proofreading.

Anyway, congratulations on finishing the first part of this! I know how fun it is to actually get to a sequel or next part when you never thought you would. Just wondering, were you intending this to be a series or did it just kind of happen? And do you know how many parts there will end up being?

Well, I've taken up enough space with my review. But, really, great job on this story! Though I seem picky with all my stupid typo-findings, all I really care about is if the writer has that certain sort of style that can pull me into the story. And you've got it, girl, and that's just awesome!

So, can't wait for the next part and update soon!

~!

Camry! you're the best there is! I'll keep on Rooting and suporting you for life! xD And you realli got me excited when i saw that you updated. But unfortunately, you haven't updated the CHAPTER. ::sobb:: But it's okay! I understand well! _ I AM eager to read Stage Two, thou. Heehee. I'll be waiting! ;D

*Your Fan*

~Cko

xD

YAY!

I know what you mean and im so happy for you! I hope to see Stage Two open very soon!

luv

-Em

Uh... it's so touchy feely... but I still like it. Gosh, sleeping on the same bed with a guy who likes you is a big step for someone who used to have a phobia for men... :)